There are too many giveaway qualifications here, i.e., "rarely" and "should," which contribute to the nonsense of the last metaphor--as in meaningless--no sense. I know you are trying to be funny, but even humor has to make sense. For someone who loves sex, rhyme-force does nothing, not even express a coherent thought at the end. Beware of those who decry sex, belittle it, denigrate it. It is the one animality we have that allows us to experience absolute delight in bringing physical pleasure to another. That is not keeping a zoo by any stretch of the imagination.
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There are too many giveaway qualifications here, i.e., "rarely" and "should," which contribute to the nonsense of the last metaphor--as in meaningless--no sense. I know you are trying to be funny, but even humor has to make sense. For someone who loves sex, rhyme-force does nothing, not even express a coherent thought at the end. Beware of those who decry sex, belittle it, denigrate it. It is the one animality we have that allows us to experience absolute delight in bringing physical pleasure to another. That is not keeping a zoo by any stretch of the imagination.
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